Feedback– Have three ideas, your slides are very text heavy. Aiming to do animations as part of your project. I would advise doing animatics and moving into more refined work as this will help you do a full animation.
You need to give us an introduction to innovation and what it means to you to demonstrate that you understand the context.
Be sure in what you are saying, a lot of “maybe” makes it seem like you have not done enough initial research even though you have.
Where are evidence of surveys for initial research. Make sure you have a contingency plan.
You have provided evidence of time management. Overall you have some good ideas but it is important to show more than just these ideas. Also justify what your final idea was and why.
Reflection –
If i did my pitch again i would have used my research on innovation from my week 1 post to make an introduction on what innovation is so it could link to my ideas easier . It also would be important to make surveys to support the ideas i have chosen , then make that clear at the end of the presentation.
research–
since I’ve chosen to use my first idea, i need to start watch tutorials on animation and figure out what style i will be going for, i also need to story board my animation even though it will not be a linear story i need to plan out the different windows and what they look like before i try and animate them. i am also planning on focusing on animatics as a contingency plan, just in case i don’t finish the animation in time
https://www.studiobinder.com/blog/what-is-an-animatic-definition/
this site was really useful with examples of animatics and why they are important. something that will be really important in my animation is the small expressions from the characters as they wont be in the main focus for a long time, so i will take inspiration from early cartoons that needed really expressive characters to get their feeling across to the audience.
I also collected some photos for inspiration on what i want the building to look like. i have gravitated more towards bigger windows since then it will be easier to see the animation and there will be less of the building to draw. i also would like it to be an apartment complex so it would be possible for people to be completely different even though they live right next to each other. i would like my animation to be panning up the building and end when it reaches the top, i think this will be easier then going side to side.
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